Thursday, February 26, 2009

漂浮

我们,
似冷似热,
友情,
是深是浅?

还记得你的一句话,
“你一以为你很了解我吗?''
那时,心灭了,受伤了。
才体会你的重要性。
你的影响力,
似乎在扩展,
你的话语,
似乎很讽刺。

斗嘴是我们的嗜好,
每次的吵闹,
都累积着伤痕。
你给我伤害,
我不得不防卫,
但,我承受不了。
请别再增添。。。

我知道,
我没那么重要。。
我深知,
我总带来烦恼。。
我明白,
我们不可能要好。。
也知道,
你厌烦我的缠绕。。


你可以不理,
可以不屑,
这些,我都能忍。。
但,请不要伤害我们的友情。

12 comments:

Anonymous said...

is this the "ORAL A"
"WAH. TYPE SO FAST. FLUENCY A"
"EVEN GOT CAPS. INTONATION A"
"mannerism B la"
tht one har?

JesSze said...

lian>O.o apa lu cakap??

JesSze said...

min>another nice post with fantastic language~pro ni budak~

DoRaEmin @ 敏 said...

haha.>lian..first time u hit the bulls eye..bt why didnt u figur out the previous post ler??

DoRaEmin @ 敏 said...

>sze..thanks thanks..u can write that good too ler..just u dont want =(

JesSze said...

eh~really cant lar~not pro in writing poems like this..

Fionne ♥ said...

敏,原来你有那么多心事哦...
我都不知道..(愧疚)
看到你写的这些都哭了哦..
写到那么感动..
很棒呢~
Sayang sayang~

DoRaEmin @ 敏 said...

哈哈。。燕,谢谢你^^。。(我听你那样说也很感动)

Ewen said...

Hey min,
Your Chinese so good. =)
My standard still very far apart.

Btw...
U have written so many posts,
which 1 for me de?
Never tell me, I never will know. xD

DoRaEmin @ 敏 said...

Aikz..mine de stil far apart from david lo..u de??u sure gt u de??

Ewen said...

Compare what la.. with vid. ~.~
Compare with me la!!
Sigh.
Coz I don know, that's why I ask.
Aduhhai..

Btw.. why i cant post comment in vid's blog?!!

DoRaEmin @ 敏 said...

Hey ..urs nt so bad ok??dun compare ma!you oso have your own style de ma..^.~..
dunno then good^^
vid de har?i oso cant..dunno why ..i thought u left before ler??